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I don't honestly know.
She just kind of happened.
She's pretty badass~ Someday you may know more XDDD
For now: Raksha is a thief for hire and a very disgustingly rich one at that.
Critiques are welcome on this. While I wont be changing the image itself I'll keep anything in mind for later on.
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This is my first critique. =o
Ok, first I would like to say, 5 stars for impact, because when I saw this in my inbox, I wanted to see it (versus normally skimming through) I believe this is do to you excellent choice of colors. It makes a fairly simple pose feel much more dynamic.
The thing I'm really gonna pick on here is anatomy. One of the first things I noticed is her anatomy looks a bit off in her torso. I think one thing that can help with this is keeping in mind the muscles. I believe there's a muscle that wraps from our pecs to our armpits. Maybe her rib cage seems a little wide too. I'm not entirely sure.
Another thing, which is barely noticeable, is the position of her hand on her hip. Only when I actually take a minute to look at it does it actually seem awkward. I think the angle of that hand/fingers makes it feel a bit more like its floating than resting on the hip. Also, I think women pop their hip to the side they're resting their hand. Not always, but I believe that's more common.
Ok, I think that's all I have to say. I still think you did a wonderful job, and I'm just being nitpicky. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>